Research and Planning: Double page spread peer comments

Above is my first draft for my double page spread. I showed it to my peers, and the feedback I received is as follows:

- Too much white
- Maybe add a blurb to photos
- Professional lay out
- More colour needed
- Main photo is attention grabber
- Put questions in a different colour
- Add a subheading to top of page - what type of article is it?
- Add a substory under the heading
- Story and pictures must be linked
- Layout should be symetrical
- 3 columns per page
- Check columns are all the same size

Because of all the improvements that have been suggested, I am going to re-do my double page spread, starting from scratch.