I like how you have got a before and after and not stuck to your first desgin. I like how you have changed the picture to a clearer photo and you can see all their faces. I like how you have more colour. I also like the small picture as it look natural. I think you should make the title bigger to cover up some of the white space. Overall I like your double page spread. Hope this has helped :)
Tasha... I love how much progress you made with your double page spread! It's incredible! I love the way you have added colour also, as I feel like it has just pieced the whol thing together really well! The article is really well written and interesting to read which is awesome and I love how the layout of it is so professional! I like how you have still used the small image, that is used in the middle of your interview as I think it's a really imaginative idea which fits in well with what the group is all about. Well done Tash :) Keep up the good work. To improve... Hmm maybe try and give the image a border or something? I'm not too sure, because I really like this :)
I like how you have got a before and after and not stuck to your first desgin. I like how you have changed the picture to a clearer photo and you can see all their faces. I like how you have more colour. I also like the small picture as it look natural. I think you should make the title bigger to cover up some of the white space. Overall I like your double page spread. Hope this has helped :)
ReplyDeleteTasha... I love how much progress you made with your double page spread! It's incredible! I love the way you have added colour also, as I feel like it has just pieced the whol thing together really well! The article is really well written and interesting to read which is awesome and I love how the layout of it is so professional! I like how you have still used the small image, that is used in the middle of your interview as I think it's a really imaginative idea which fits in well with what the group is all about. Well done Tash :) Keep up the good work. To improve... Hmm maybe try and give the image a border or something? I'm not too sure, because I really like this :)
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